tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5688956750044872199.post1843578454284371317..comments2013-11-16T03:37:13.807-08:00Comments on Year 6 Chiller Project 2013: Granny's GraveMr Hanleyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05148451540194400075noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5688956750044872199.post-77544877689271149132013-02-13T10:43:41.507-08:002013-02-13T10:43:41.507-08:00I was finding it difficult to sleep I was tossing ...I was finding it difficult to sleep I was tossing and turning for what seemed like hours I turned and looked at my alarm clock and it was five thirty in the morning I looked over at the window and saw a shadow I looked behind me making sure nothing was there I called my dad he finally what is it I think there is someone outside my window dont worry it's probably a fox or something "no I'm preety sure it's a person" dad dad dad DDDAAADDD.! I went closer to the window and stared at the shadow, the shadow stared back then suddenly I screemed as she was dragged out the window <br /><br />My dad came in and saw blood all over the window he was also dragged out the window.He saw a picture of me he cryed no who would do this he saw what I saw from the cornor of his eye he prented he had never saw.He carryed on walking till he saw a a rusty,ancient,unused building as he was walking in he saw the same shadow that he ignored the universe told him to go back home he didnt listen<br /><br />he heard gigling then the hairs on his neck began to stand yp one by one,he tryed to run.Eventually the shawdow come with two thing a hook and scratching the tempo was low it became louder,and louder,and louder the scratchin became stamping.<br /><br />The shadow came rapidly spriting towards him all the doors slamed shut. My dad was pushed to the wall the guy had a blacked out coustume with a mask he remembered he had a... bat in the back of his trousers.He put both hands behind his back and WACK BOOM SLAM BANG the man was slowy falling to the ground.My dad took of the mask it was... A skull my dad smashed the window and escaped and went the same way that he came here back home,the man no longer had a shadow but he was still following My dad and when he went bed he was murderd ANOTHER FAMILLY TAKEN!<br /><br />By Reece<br />Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5688956750044872199.post-59783292070503008092013-02-12T13:52:34.566-08:002013-02-12T13:52:34.566-08:00Brilliant use of language here folks.
I especiall...Brilliant use of language here folks.<br /><br />I especially liked the sentence fragment here:<br />...wondering if I would ever see the sun again, I closed my eyes.Mr Hanleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05148451540194400075noreply@blogger.com